These Boots aren't Walking

Sunday, June 15, 2014





The abusive relationship caused emotional distraught
He stacked his boots in an effort not to be caught

17/102

OR..

He stacked the boots
Like details in life
Ever so perfect
Matching his wife
Knowing she was leaving
Caused him distress
An upheaval ..a mess!

25/136

OR

Hidden in plain sight
Was the best way
He'd never find them
While on display
'Membering the upheaval caused
Now he'd think his boots were lost

26/138

Grandma has outdone herself this week with her challenge.  The photo above requires a story containing 140 characters/words or less. The bonus word is "upheaval."  You can see that I didn't work it into the first poem. Visit Grandma at succinctly yours and see how low you can go. 

Thanks for your visit. Take care and God bless!





5 comments:

Teresa Powell Coltrin June 17, 2014 at 9:35 AM  

And you delivered! Great job.

kaykuala June 17, 2014 at 11:25 AM  

Obviously he has to make a lot of adjustments without his wife. Alternatively he can still salvage the situation. Wonderful write Judy!

Hank

Jim June 17, 2014 at 10:45 PM  

Hi Judy ~~ Been a long time!
My fave tonight is your "Hidden in plain sight." Mrs. Jim could get away with that with me any day she wanted.
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Tammy June 18, 2014 at 10:36 AM  

Great takes! I loved them all.

Colette S June 19, 2014 at 2:59 PM  

A picture can indeed make 1000 words :)

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