Quibbling or Nibbling?

Sunday, June 22, 2014





She signed up on ten matchmaking sights
With never a nibble
And now she was anxious to meet her match
Even if he looked like dribble

26/129

OR..

Never anything more than a nibble
But he had no time to quibble
He'd catch a ride back into town
Where some real fish could be found

27/129

OR..


She took a big bite
Then just a nibble
It was time to move on
Not time to quibble
Then there he stood
Just outside her window...

27/124

Grandma offers a weekly micro-fiction challenge called succinctly yours. She provides the photo and we provide our imagination in writing a short story of 140 characters or words or less. Our bonus word is "nibble". How low can you go?


5 comments:

Jim June 23, 2014 at 1:13 AM  

I 'think' I like your # 1 the best. Poor thing, she sounded desperate. I liked all your bites, nibbles, dribbles, and quibbles.
Smile :)
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Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger June 24, 2014 at 12:37 PM  

And I like #3--smiles!

Tammy June 25, 2014 at 12:36 PM  

Still giggling about that lurking dribble who answered the ad. I don't think I'd be renewing that contract.

Colette S August 7, 2014 at 2:00 AM  

#1 still giving me the giggles :)

Self Sagacity August 17, 2014 at 7:33 PM  

It's always interesting your poems. I think I like the first one the best here. Hope you are doing well- just stopping in to say Hi!

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