Red Alert

Sunday, March 30, 2014


The sister of Dennis 
Was quite a menace 
The terror of dolls 
And kittens alike
15/75

OR

Oh my!” said Aunt Mae
Filled with dismay
Five minutes to curtain call
Now how do I stall?
19/87

OR

She told the painter
To clean up when done
She would have him fired
If he wasn't her son!
19/86

Thank you Grandma for another challenge!! She calls it succinctly yours. I call it fun. She provides the photo and we are allowed to use 140 words/characters to tell the story. The bonus word this week is "menace".




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7 comments:

Jim March 31, 2014 at 10:32 AM  

I like your second the best, Judy. They are all great though.
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Yamini MacLean March 31, 2014 at 2:53 PM  

Hari OM
I like all of these and decided they are equal, couldn't pick one over the other! YAM xx

Pat March 31, 2014 at 8:40 PM  

Three excellent poems, Judy! I chuckled the most at the last one.

Colette S April 1, 2014 at 6:05 PM  

I like the first one :) But they are all very good Judy!

Icy BC April 3, 2014 at 7:05 AM  

I love the last one! It's a perfect irony :)

Tammy April 3, 2014 at 7:56 PM  

Each was funnier than the next!

Grandmas Goulash April 6, 2014 at 12:21 AM  

A wonderful threesome! Menace evoked Dennis for both of us. I just loved the last one. Rather tough to sue your own kid!

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