Jibber Jabber

Sunday, February 16, 2014



He taught her pantomime 
Tiring of her jabber 
She enjoyed the mime 
And hoped theater 
Would have her. 
 90

OR

Hands of black
Heart of gold
If only she didn't jabber
All she was told...
74

OR

There was a girl
Her name was Jabber
Her Daddy was Grabber
And Mama, Blabber
76

My Microsoft word is giving me  headaches, so I resorted to using Design 215 for character counting. I just couldn't pass up Grandma's weekly micro-fiction challenge called succinctly yours. It's always fun and the diversion is awesome. Grandma asks that we participate using her photo as inspiration and create a 140 word/character short story. Join Grandma and show us how low you can go. The bonus word this week is jabber. 

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9 comments:

Jim February 16, 2014 at 9:31 PM  

Nice, funny, Judy. I'm still smiling over the last one. :) :)
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Pat February 16, 2014 at 9:38 PM  

Pantomime,heart of gold, Jabber, Grabber, Blabber---a great poetic threesome with three different viewpoints. I really like your funny poems, Judy...very clever!

John (@bookdreamer) February 17, 2014 at 2:41 AM  

Good range

Tammy February 17, 2014 at 9:20 AM  

Very clever, all of them. I enjoyed each as much as the next!

Yamini MacLean February 17, 2014 at 9:51 AM  

Hari OM
Yes all good - but number two says so much more then either words or picture!! YAM xx

mail4rosey February 18, 2014 at 9:46 AM  

All good, but I love the first one!!

Colette S February 18, 2014 at 8:36 PM  

I like the first one most too but yes all of them are very good.

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger February 19, 2014 at 5:56 PM  

Very cool Judy--again--a beautiful little girl to make me think of my own!

Icy BC February 20, 2014 at 6:22 AM  

I like the second one best, Judy! You're as clever as ever..

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